Distortion, ahh!!
The melody was very nice and entertaining. But some of it was distorted because of the pads. Lot's of things was going on, which was good. But maybe you should've add a soft slowing part to make it even more interesting. And, you should really get plugins dude. That would make your stuff even more professional. Cause the beat was a bit plain and too weak. And you gotta fix up the clariety dude, it really got me annoyed. Some synths were WAY too loud. If youd turn it down a bit, that would defenetly help you. Do you even master it? Cause its loud! Not that I put my speakers up high, it's just loud. It's not that Im a hater, it's just that you need too improve your beat making, mastering, and synthesizers. Sounds like you use Fl studio. I do too. If you contact me, I could give you awesome plugins that will help you with your music. I still think your great! It's just that your really bad at the clariety and mastering of songs.
Keep up the good work anyways,
-Pulse6-